I'm happy to share mine (you're more than welcome to use them!):
*Do you find any spots where you just want to skip ahead?
*Is the dialogue fun?
*Does the romance sound real?
*Are the words easy to understand?
*Is there enough description to help you feel ‘there’?
*Is there too much detail? Please highlight where. And if you feel there is too much detail, which do you like best?
*Do the characters feel real to you? Do you like the them?
*Do you find yourself connecting with the characters?
*Are the characters' voices distinctive—do they feel real?
*Does the main character’s transition sound realistic?
*Does the character’s ending circumstance sound believable?
Do you have your own list?
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